Hi Amiel - why did you pick Steven Adams? Do you know he comes from a very famous sporting family - he has lots of brothers and sisters! Keep blogging, and commenting on others, to increase your chance of winning one of the awesome prizes and to keep up your learning over the school break!
What made you pick Steven Adams? He is an incredible sports player along with the rest of this family too. Do you play basketball or have an interest with it?
When I looked through your work I noticed you wrote ' How did you got famous in basketball?' this sentence doesn't quite make sense. Maybe you could change the word got to something else. Other than that great job on the rest of your work.
Hi Amiel - why did you pick Steven Adams? Do you know he comes from a very famous sporting family - he has lots of brothers and sisters! Keep blogging, and commenting on others, to increase your chance of winning one of the awesome prizes and to keep up your learning over the school break!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Amiel,
ReplyDeleteWhat made you pick Steven Adams? He is an incredible sports player along with the rest of this family too. Do you play basketball or have an interest with it?
When I looked through your work I noticed you wrote ' How did you got famous in basketball?' this sentence doesn't quite make sense. Maybe you could change the word got to something else. Other than that great job on the rest of your work.
Jennae:)